I'm a strict reviewer but this took the mick
Right first of all i cant really criticise as i havent even launched a cartoon on the net yet, and also going to take in account my first practice animations were awful but i never launched them on the net. I appreciate the fact that your new but this was all wrong in every way posibble.
Speech, well the writing didnt even stay on the screen long enough for people to read it most of the time, the animation was awful and the music, seriously, what were you thinking. You must of been having a laugh when you put that in. If your going to become an animator actually practice before hand, plan and stuff, doing it off the top of your head doesnt work.
Also, was this really a comedy?